[SML 7782] Re: The Japanese version of ESUG flyer update to Rev.82

[Serge Stinckwich]

2010/2/17 Takeshi MUTOH <mutoh ＠ openedu.org>:
> むとう＠おしごとばです。
>
> なんか、ひっじょーに不安になってきたので、とりあえず日本側に投げてみます。
>
> きっつーい、ツッコミお願いします(_o_)
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> Hi, folks!!
>
> Now, I update the Japanese version of ESUG flyer to English version
> Rev.82 for the event named OSC 2010/Tokyo Spring.
> - (In Japanese) http://www.ospn.jp/osc2010-spring/
>
> Umezawa-san will open a booth as Smalltalk-users.jp.
> Now, SML ML and Squeak-ja ML check my translation.
>
> It's at here:
> - http://squeak.610t.org/ESUGflyer/flyer-Rev82.pdf
>
> In Japanese version, I add some Japanese contents like some books, and
> some links. Is it Ok?
>
> Yoshiki-san give me some comment below, but almost of all are good
> comment for the English version of ESUG flyer.
>  - Is it correct to say the "creation" of Smalltalk is in "the early
>    1980s"?
>  - It reads a bit awkward to name applications made about 10 to 5
>    years ago and say they are "current applications" and "advancing
>    the state of software".
>  - Sophie went on to Java, and Scratch is going on to
>    ActionScript/Flash.  It would be better to mention Teleplace but
>    remove OpenCroquet.
>  - It would be good to mention Jun.
>
>  - The description of the "Image" uses two "contains" and confusing a
>    bit; it is not clear that image "is" the environment and consists
>    of these things.
>  - "debugging while it is executing" should not a part of the description
>    of the "Image".
>  - Saying that a virtual machine is "a program which (?) ... executes
>    other programs" is a bit too vague.  I think that the description
>    for the virtual machine should go the along the line of "a virtual
>    machine is a machine, but happened to be done in software", and
>    not limited to executing programs but accessing other virtual
>    hardware components.
>  - Since there are languages with the type inference, "the developer ...
>    indicate the type is not a good explanation of static typing.  And
>    whether code is reusable or not is a big problem; explaining it
>    only from the static/dynamic typing POV seems over controversial.
>
>  - In "Events", perhaps the Smalltalks event in Argentina may be a
>    good addition.
>
>  - On the back side, "Reserved characters" look odd.  Rather it is
>    part of syntax?
>
> How about update the English version of ESUG flyer?


Hi all,
nice to see that the flyer that we start with Damien Cassou some years
ago is used also in Japan ;-)
If you made some updates to the japanese or english version of the
flyer, please send modifications to Damien (in CC of this message).

Thank you.
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Serge Stinckwich
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